Damn it all

This poem is easily relatable and most certainly an easy read. I like this one a bit more than the other one of yours I read, particularly because I found it a bit humorous. :3

I'll debrief my ratings on this now. -

Vision has four and a half stars because the meaning is conveyed so simply. Anyone can read it and understand the meaning. The title even gives it away, which is something I don't like when the poem is crystal clear itself, but that's just me.

Originality has two and a half stars because pretty much anyone can think this up. It's also a common topic to write about.

Technique has three stars because it flowed for the most part but there were tiny things which disrupted the flow such as;
Line 4. I think it has too many syllables or something because it would read better with one syllable less. Maybe it's the word "goddamned" because I replaced it with "fucking" and it seemed to flow well enough to me. But one syllable less would be better to me, but keep it as you want, it's not that big of a deal. Just a minor one <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>
Line 5 - it's should be its
Got a taste the good life? That doesn't make sense. Got the taste of a good life...would make sense, but I fear it may be too many syllables. Perhaps not though.. Nope it would be good. Sorry about that. :3
All of your lines are capitalized besides the last one so just capitalize it?

Impact has three stars because it didn't leave any significant impression on me, nor did it strike a chord or any feelings within me, but it's very relatable.

This poem is short and simple. It's a good poem nonetheless.. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>